Autumn mist

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I ran and ran and ran. When I finally opened my eyes, no-one was following me anymore. I was all alone, apart from the gentle sway of the trees. Gorgeous mist swept across the field, brushing the red leaves.

All that could be heard was a quiet breeze, and the occasional leaf fluttering down. It hadn't quite sunk in yet. I was alone. All alone. I danced round trees, before realizing just how much my legs hurt from the running.

Then I could hear the pounding footsteps, distant voices. I couldn't see just how far away they were, with all the mist, but I knew they were close.

My feet were sore from the escape earlier, although I knew I couldn't give up now. I dragged my body up as they came in sight.

And I ran, and ran, and ran.


I hoped you liked my little story and HAPPY AUTUMN!

Please let me know your opinions, criticism included!



  1. You're great at imagery! I really don't have anything negative to say about it! :D

    xoxo Morning

  2. Cool post! I really liked the story too. And the picture!
    Are you having a cold Autumn? My Spring is cold then
    freezing then boiling! It's so annoying!

  3. This is a wonderful story! Thank you for sharing ♥
    Amy xx

    Little Moon Dragon


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