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I ran and ran and ran. When I finally opened my eyes, no-one was following me anymore. I was all alone, apart from the gentle sway of the trees. Gorgeous mist swept across the field, brushing the red leaves.
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Then I could hear the pounding footsteps, distant voices. I couldn't see just how far away they were, with all the mist, but I knew they were close.
My feet were sore from the escape earlier, although I knew I couldn't give up now. I dragged my body up as they came in sight.
And I ran, and ran, and ran.
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I hoped you liked my little story and HAPPY AUTUMN!
Please let me know your opinions, criticism included!
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Cool story!
ReplyDeleteYou're great at imagery! I really don't have anything negative to say about it! :D
ReplyDeletexoxo Morning
Cool post! I really liked the story too. And the picture!
ReplyDeleteAre you having a cold Autumn? My Spring is cold then
freezing then boiling! It's so annoying!
Abi
This is a wonderful story! Thank you for sharing ♥
ReplyDeleteAmy xx
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