Hola Lexicans! Today I have written a little free verse poem-y, whatever it really is. I hope you enjoy it, I am having a little bit of blogger's block at the moment!!! HELP MEEEEE! Anyway, here it is (sorry in advance for my extremely heavy and unnecessary use of italics!!!)
here i am
and there you are
the distance is so close
yet so far
i try to link
hearts
but the
connection is poor
whether or not
you even notice my presence
i do not know
but i wonder
if you sometimes
see my smile
think about it
too
i wonder
if you daydream
about me
like i do
about you
maybe you never will
notice me
maybe you already
have
i'll just keep on
waiting and waiting
until you
find me
So there it is!! Haha, I know it wasn't very good, but I'd love to hear your opinions. BE HONEST! If you think it was a little weak, or could have been more deep etc. etc. do let me know!
xxx
I think it's good :)
ReplyDeleteWow, that's really good Lexie! I love poetry and that was fun to read.
ReplyDeleteI also have bloggers block at the moment. :)
loved it!
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